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Cartoon by VALERIA ANGIULLI.

20 Nov 2017

Subroom: Student Newsroom


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The idea is good but some remarks on the drawing:
- too many styles together that don't fit together
- use similar or one lettering style for your text and signature
- practice on your shadowing. Best way is to keep watching professional cartoonists work and try to visualize how they do it. Imagine that there is an invisible light lamp on your paper somewhere, and according to that direction visualize the shadows. Until then best to keep it simple with colors and use thin and thick inking lines.
- centralize your cartoon, because now there is a white gap on the right side.

In general, in cartoons 75% is the idea represented and 25% the personality of your artistic style. You don't have to draw like Da Vinci to produce fine work, but you need to have a balance, flow and your own personality into the drawing. Try to find original ideas that haven't been drawn yet. That's from me so far, cause I'm still in the learning process :) Good luck and keep up the good work!

24 Nov 2017

Good evening, VALERIA ANGIULLI is my girlfriend, she ask me if I could help her to do the job, I just help her to complete it, but she do all the work..

20 Nov 2017

Sorry, some glitch and i double my comment:)

20 Nov 2017

Ok, I will be the Cowell of the jury :) composition could have been better because you can easily cut left half of picture off and nothing generally change. Also, you need use clipart and other things what you take from other sources very careful, because with every that not drawn detail you lose the piece of your unique style, and that's is most important for an artist -his unique style.
Also, I think Trump's head is a copy of Paoli919 works, who is a real author?

20 Nov 2017

Ok, i will be the Cowell of the jury :) composition could have been better, because you can easily cut left half of picture off and nothing generally change. Also, you need use clipart and other things what you take from other sources very careful, because with every that not drawn detail you lose the piece of your unique style, and that's is most important for an artist -his unique style.
Also, i think Trump's head is a copy of Paoli919 works, who is a real author?

20 Nov 2017

Good work!!

20 Nov 2017

Good work. She could become a professional caricaturist.

20 Nov 2017

Buona idea. A parte i labbroni, la caricatura è buona. Cura meglio i dettagli: colori (cos'é quel pastrocchio sul badsamento? ;-) ), pieghe della stoffa, retini e colori.

20 Nov 2017

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